Adventure time - Nicholas Tauiliili

Adventure Time!

One day, Jake and Fin went to the library so they could find out how to get rid of the blank-eyed girls. 

When they got the information they needed Jake and Fin went home.  The creepy blanked-eyed girls had already got into their house.They walked in like nothing was there. Jake and Finn tried not to be scared.

Suddenly the blank-eyed girls started to fade away because the black-eyed girls thought Jake and Finn stopped believing in them. 


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  1. Hi Nicholas I really liked how you said the creepy blanked eyed girls walked in like nothing was there. I watch Adventure Time and Fin and Jake are hilarious. I wonder if this episode was scary to you?
    By Daniel

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  2. Hi Nicholas. I like the way you are using adjectives like creepy and fade because you are making the story more interesting . I have watched the same thing as well and I thought Fin and Jake were going to disappear. What did you think was going to happen?
    By Matts.

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