My Narrative -Mustafaa

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       THE MYSTERIOUS
                 MONSTER
One early morning in New York, Jamie was going for run. He said angrily “Come on legs!” He ran around the whole block.

But at his local hospital just out on the door Jamie heard one of the doctors,  DR.DOOMSDAY say “ My monsters are going to rule the city,” as he injected a magical potion into the monster. Jamie is freaked out, he is running for his life as he hid behind a massive laboratory.
He broke the glass! "Ahh,” he shouted, as he mixed a potion that could KILL him! With a drop he said, “I Believe!”He continues to mix a powerful potion. He loads the liquid in a tranquillizer and shoots all the monsters. He became a hero in his city for killing all the monsters.... or did he?
Author :Mustafaa

Comments

  1. Anonymous21 May 2018 at 17:07

    Hi Mustafaa, I really enjoyed your blog about the Mysterious monster. My favorite part was when you said or did he? I would love to know more about this Mysterious monster that Dr.Doomsday created in his massive laboratory. I think I have seen a mysterious monster outside my bedroom but it was just a cat. Your story made a picture in my mind about what Dr. Doomsday looks like. What was your favorite part of the story?
    By Victoria

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    1. B9 Warriors29 May 2018 at 19:19

      Hi Victoria my favourite part is the labotory

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  2. B722 May 2018 at 15:18

    Hey Mustafaa I really like your story especially with details and description.By Jalierus

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  3. Anonymous24 May 2018 at 15:39

    Hi Mustafaa, I really love your story about this. I love the part when it say's My monsters are going to rule the city when I saw that part I could already picture that in my head and imaged I was there. I just have one question what is your favourite part about your story?

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    1. B9 Warriors29 May 2018 at 19:23

      Hi my favourite part was when Jamie broke the glass

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